tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2464689387234274040.post6012140321149863799..comments2008-01-20T08:31:57.224-08:00Comments on Backwater Dreamland: Jeffery's PrologueStephenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12909453976494146196noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2464689387234274040.post-66809812991478641112008-01-20T08:31:00.000-08:002008-01-20T08:31:00.000-08:00Ok that was the prologue, as you can see from all ...Ok that was the prologue, as you can see from all the comments left we are all waiting for Chapter One. Good begining. I just hope you explain how he busts out. Did he punch a hole in reality and escape? Oh, my first for real blog is up please go check it out and let me know what you think.Nategaudreg.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2464689387234274040.post-55320034018395080152008-01-14T12:25:00.000-08:002008-01-14T12:25:00.000-08:00Thank you everyone for your comments and things. :...Thank you everyone for your comments and things. :)Stephenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12909453976494146196noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2464689387234274040.post-82592439854537654992008-01-13T23:13:00.000-08:002008-01-13T23:13:00.000-08:00I told you that I would read your story and I have...I told you that I would read your story and I have. So once again *even though I already told you that I enjoyed listening to you talk about it* it was pretty amazing and I honestly do hope that you finish this like I asked you to ....but yea man I really liked it, you did an amazing job.<BR/>CandaceAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2464689387234274040.post-11578873727022211052008-01-11T01:53:00.000-08:002008-01-11T01:53:00.000-08:00That was really, really good and well written. I'm...That was really, really good and well written. I'm no super pro at grammer and punctuation (as a matter of fact I'm probably pretty horrible), but there were a few things I noticed that do need some touching up. If you want me to show you what they are just let me know.<BR/><BR/>Regardless of those few minor mistakes (again, I probably would have made many more if it was me who had written the story), I really like it. I've always been pretty suck at writing narrative stories and I'm pretty jealous that you're good at it.Adamhttp://www.megagoosey.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2464689387234274040.post-4765664217143545322008-01-10T10:53:00.000-08:002008-01-10T10:53:00.000-08:00I LOVE YOU STEVE!I LOVE YOU AND I WISH YOU THE BES...I LOVE YOU STEVE!<BR/><BR/>I LOVE YOU AND I WISH YOU THE BEST OF LUCK!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2464689387234274040.post-35190722218868828562008-01-10T01:01:00.000-08:002008-01-10T01:01:00.000-08:00I really like this story steve. You write with a v...I really like this story steve. You write with a very nice flow to the words and I liked your concept too.<BR/><BR/><BR/>-KattasticAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com